ohh

nice........it wasn't perfect but you had some changeups and the shit wit the piano was nice

holla if you wana collab, the shit hit hard tho

you need a more powerful kick tho

aight

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Could 've been much better

Well, actually when it started i thought there was going to be rap involved but the drums kept going on the same and same and the bass wasn't really that bassy
you could speed up it a bit, make the bass have more bass
make the drums sound smoother and cooler so that it melts down in the music cause the way it is now doesn´t really make me Hit da spot...
What program did you use to make this?
It sounds like FL Studio which i use and I think something like this you made takes me like 10 minutes.
Anyways, u could also check my audio, theres coming a hip hop number in it soon, and uuuuuh it´s not the one called Sorry Shaya cuz its Dutch and i made it for one of my teachers called shaya which i hate:P:P:P
So keep it up bro, have some more criticism about yourself whether to post or not.

Jay3.