Too short
while this was pretty good, but it needs a much more longer in depth and just longer overall, i know its a loop and all, but this would be nice if it was longer and even add some variaty of differant sounds and mixes aswell to give it some more depth, it was really fast, and that was ok just needs to be longer and as said with much more depth to it, so there are some stuff you can do also suggested, but overall this was a pretty good piece and i liked it, so more effort making it longer would be a complete and fantastic finish, anyways nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well some advice would be as mentioned make it longer, add some more mix of sounds, but for sure would make it much longer.