Do you know what your doing?!

Look ill be leaniant, it is obvious you probably put forth alot of work in this, but here is the deal, this song is way to repetetive. your bass is annoying and this song doesnt make any sense. It gets a little better towards the end, but please try to get away from repeated bass when thats all that is heard. Do something different. I give you a 3 for effort.