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Man you got 0-bombed hard, which is a shame, 'cause it's quite a nice laid-back song. This track definitely is so underserving of the low score, so expect some 5-bombing on my part.
Straight away you set up the mood of the piece with the pitch-bends in the melody. Feels like the kind of thing you'd hear in a jam session; just that unassuming coolness that you can get from something simple but effective. The change in pace at 0;16 was nice; the palm muting's really clear and defined, but still light enough to fit with the mood of the track.
For something that's loosely improvised, you certainly do have a pretty decent structure to the track; there's the chorus theme that keeps coming back, there's a clear progression between the phrases, nice variation in the harmony...I'd say easily, the different harmonic changes throughout the different phrases is a highlight of the piece, because you have these fractionally darker and lighter sections, while still generally keeping that mellow mood.
That being said, I think by the end I was finding it to drag a little, wouldn't have minded it straying perhaps into another more varied section...but in general, I'd say you should 'fuck about' with your acoustic more, because you've made some pretty nice sounds here. Keep it up.
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