A for effort!

I love pink floyd dude, and its a good try and recreating the recording environment of the sixties, when this song was recorded. The lo-fi stuff is great anyway, though I think you may have overdone the distortion a bit.

wtf everybody

this aint that bad. just get some better recording equipment!

Farmin's right.

You shouldn't muffle your voice, and maybe ya should've added background stuff in with an audio editor, you know like a drumbeat. Currently it sux, but you are better than guitar than me.

what?

Is this serious?

Yeah....

You could benefit from not muffling your voice...unless its a joke...in which case its not very funny...although i laughed at the end..