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0:00-The very start is quite quiet, but slowly gets into more audible volumes as more things are added.
0:29-Like the synth that comes in here, nice automation lets it add to the buildup nicely
0:38 Break works well, there seemed to be a VERY deep drum sound just before it which sounded very interesting.
0:58-New synth is good, can see you're going lengths to try and make the song less repetitive.
1:18-Really liked the intro of the piano, it sounded like an automation from the previous synth into the piano, which made for a very cool sound.
1:39-The pad synth is waaay too quiet, can barely hear it. It was possibly deliberate, but still seems a little odd.
1:55-Cool automation on the lead synthl I like all the instrument changes trying to keep the variety up
2:30-Like the verrry slow sense of buildup you get from the bassy synth, though I think the buildup generally is a tad too overdrawn
3:00-Cool thing after the build, but after having the same melody for almost a minute, a change in melody would have been very good idea, especially as the melody doesn't change past this point til 3:30
4:00-Drums getting louder was a plus, Definite change of feel with the synths was a nice move.
4:19-PIano was cool...seemed melodically unrelated to the bass synth underneath, though, moreso when the other synth took over from the piano.
5:02-and 5:11-the lead synth in 5 seconds following these two timestamps, and going forward from there, are the only times the bass melody and the lead melody fit in my head. The other 50% of the time it didn't really seem to fit.
6:07-same kind of thing as before, having the same melody looping for a whole minute should ring alarms. Melody fits with the padsynth farily well, though

Generally you've got some nice sounds and a good atmosphere in the track, but by the 3rd minute it does start getting quite overdrawn with 4 minutes still to go. Having more definite structural breaks and changes in melody would have countered this a little, but more than that; more melodies. Having two for seven minutes is just punishing yourself into an impossible task, y'know? :P Keep it up, nonetheless.

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Remix

-I think you did a rather swell job of reworking this song from the original. It might still be repetitive but it's not quite as repetitive as the original was. You did a great job of quickening the pace and adding many additional percussion elements and even a piano into the mix. I still felt that the length of the song was a bit much. Even though it does have variety it just wasn't enough to compensate for the length of the song. I'm not going to downgrade for that though since you put a lot of effort into this song and it sounds wonderful. Looking forward to more stuff from you.

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Beyond awesome.

Your O Rly Mix caught my attention, and now you have created this. Your music is truly a treat for the community, I love tracks like this. It's a nice "soft" remix, but still pretty energetic. I definitely hope for more of your tracks, you have skill.

Very nice.

Youve got a good style going on here man, good job on this, its quite good, also from all the psytrance you listen to, it sounds like youve adopted some psytrance characteristics into your works too... May be mild characteristics but there still there. Nice work.

Whoa :D

NICE MAN fats too ^^ ..and i agree with the guy under me..u found ur stlyle man ..and this song i like a lot bro keep it up ....just to give u a tip bro...dont put the master volume in FL studio up..it distorts the song a little..lke if u wanna hear the song louder just turn up the comp volume cuz i used to do tht and my music used to hurt my own ears lol...but other than tht maannice job on the song :D...keep it up.lookin foward for more music ight ^^