My review, your song.

Could easily benefit from a bit more instrument variation.

0:14, 0:19. 0:24 many other spots the lower bass note is clipping. Limit the mixer channel the synth is on, don't increase the bass so much. Its blurring over and giving parts a tinnyish sound because its not playing properly (its getting distorted).

Odd melody/progression, but nothing horrendous on the ears. Very wandery.

I'd suggest playing with writing a melody with more complex syncopation, or at least more varied, the entirety of this is on the on-beat and gets a very repetitive nature to it that hurts the piece.

Experiment with some drums, something soft could have really improved this.

Not astounding but certainly not bad. Keep in that direction and you'll do well.