My review, your song.
Some neat sfx going on in the intro. Not a big fan of the machine gunning clap sounds. The opening snare doesn't really fit tonally with the rest of whats present. Something with more grit would be better.
The gabber kick could probably have some note variation to make it moer palateable, instead of droning a single note you could work it into the melody a bit more for a cohesive sound.
Near 1:20 a soft clip or EQ out on high freqs on the master channel could help tone down the rather unpleasant resonance.
2:00 minute mark, doesn't sound like anything has been EQ'd to fit a specific range, everything blurs over eachother and kind of hurts any definition the song may otherwise have had. It becomes a bit too convoluted.
2:33 as the filter goes down the bass clips a ltitle, make sure the affected channels are limited, lower the quality on the filter if clipping is still an issue.
The vocal sample in the background could be varied a bit, or just flat out dropped in some sections so that its less repetitive, and the mix is easier to clean up.
Overall there is a lot of neat FX, fair length for a hardstyle song, and clearly effort put into this. The primary weak points (in my mind) are that the mix is made to be loud and in a slightly improper manner that hurts the clarity of the song. Other weakpoint would be as far as melody is concerned, its a single track song with kicks and FX.
If anything I've said is unclear regarding mix or you need a bit of direction, just shoot a PM to me.