not bad

Pretty much everything has already been covered. Only other thing is that I'm not a huge fan of that kick, may just be me though.

umm yea

what that guy said. i think this sounds pretty good either way though. great job!

Your song, my review.

Your spizz strings sound very low quality. You need to improve their overall sound with some changes/additions in the mix. I'd suggest adding a bit of chorus (nothing that adds an electronic nature to them), and some subtle reverb.

Very loopable string backdrop for a hiphop song.

Make sure when the choir comes in your drums are made to play on top of the choir, it drowns out the beat a bit which isn't ideal for lyricing on top of.

Twiddle your db_glitch a bit more to play something organised, it sounded a bit like it just randomly triggered. As much fun as a tool it may be for randomization of sorts, its best used when entirely controlled.

1:33 the piano-scratching type sound (it plays earlier too), very cool.

With your choir you should probably increase the decay or add some reverb. Within the mix if you automate its volume to swell a bit more on the notes hit/attack you can probably make them sound more organic.

Overall the song is very centrally panned. The snare I though would be cool if it was drastically expanded in the stereo department to be complete surround. Same with the choir. Add some more spacial distancing within the song.

I rather liked the track overall.