Nice attempt

I think I can see what you were going for. I think it was something similar to a house song with really strong bass and beats, but I could be horribly wrong :P Either way, I think the execution of the song was a bit poor.

The EQ'ing sounds a bit flat, if there was any. Also, I think if you increased the power of the sidechain, it would sound A LOT better. Along with that, add some different drum lines and melodies to keep the song from getting boring.

I think a really good song can come from this. Just keep working with it :)

4/5