not too bad

But after such a large intro, the rest of the beat felt pretty thin.You should definitely allow the pads or what ever they are to stay in, instead of cutting it off as the beat comes in. The intro sounds like something I would sample, so I'm not sure why you didn't use it more. Also, that bass is really low, both tonally and volume wise. You are using extremely low frequencies that really only strong bass systems will be able to play properly. This song has a lot of potential!!! I hope to hear the final version.

its cool

I would complane about the bass being to low but it just fits right in.