nice song!

sounds very good however with the ending (yes the ending needs work i know you said that =P) it seems a bit.......... empty could ya maybe put a bit more in it? o also what would be realy nice is if you made the song loop! that way i can sit there listening to it for hours on end while ignoring my annoying brother and sister XD anyways keep makin good music and you get a 9/10 5/5 and a bottle of epiksauce!

Awesome.

This here is the best techno song I've heard so far in my life. Make some more :)
(P.S Make some longer)

Very cool, catchy in fact

0:07 Sounds very dramatic. I'm getting sucked in.
0:23 Very cool. I actually like the melody.
0:41 Melody goes quiet then loud sometimes. Like it though.
0:57 The drums esp. impress me.
1:08 This break is much-needed.
1:18 Very epic.
1:21 The ending could use a tweak to increase drama. I.e. an extra bar. O i c you said that in ur comments

Other than that, I was sucked in, man, very nice! I'd give you an 8 out of 10. Thanks for letting me listen.