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Song #4! Finally acquiring a full version of FL, i went back through a bunch of project i was never able to finish. This was the only good one, so i put some work in and exploded the rest!


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Yes

Oh yes, I like this one a lot. This will be the 3rd track of yours I've downloaded. The whole track flows just amazingly. It's epic and probably the best song I've heard from you. Your style is awesome, keep up the good work.

The only criticism I can think to give this is that it's not as long as I wish it was and it seems like you kinda copped out on the ending. Not a very creative ending or intro for that matter. I suppose if you worked on those a bit it would be perfect. Keep up the good work!

MobiusIII responds:

I appreciate the review! Yeah, I wish this one was a bit longer too, listening to it again. I have this fear of my songs being too repetitive (which is weird since I'm into electronica 'n stuff) - thats probably why I close it out so soon.

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the compliment!

In The Jungle

I felt as if I was in the Jungle. From the sound of this song I think you should take another whack at it, but next time ditch the Techno and see what you can do without it. Take a more Classical or Tribal approach to it, in other words I'm talking about a remix.

MobiusIII responds:

A remix you say? I've never tried remixing my own song before, maybe ill give it a whirl. Thanks for the review!

Liked It

Loved the combos you used. The only thing I would change in my OPINION (some people have gotten pissy about my advice on their songs >:[ ) is take the part between 0:34 and 0:51 and move it to about 1:23, or somewhere later in the song. It sounds more like a climax part of the song to me. I think if you let the slow start flow into that nice chime sounding piece that starts at 0:52 it'd sound great.

Keep on rockin' friend and review me back if you get a moment!

MobiusIII responds:

Thanks for the review! I'll take your suggestion and see how it works out. I couldn't make up my mind on how to get it started so i figured the wailing guitar part would be acceptable XD

EDIT/// I just checked out your song, Vengeance 2. I could learn many things from you haha. Good stuff!

Credits & Info

Listens
816
Downloads
58
Score
Waiting for 2 more votes

Uploaded
Jun 22, 2010
12:02 AM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
2 MB
2 min 12 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.