This deserves a higher score

So I'm giving it a 10 star review to balance the hate! :D

You've got some compositional ability, and you've figured out automation clips (which took me like a month) and you're only starting out, so don't get discouraged! You've got some potential, but if I were you I'd move out into finding new drum sounds to use in your songs. The piano sounds fantastic though!

I wrote stuff like this early on, so you could probably turn out even better than me!

Check out my stuff, maybe send me a PM, and I'll show you the ropes sometimes.