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Full band song I composed, wrote and recorded. It's something experimental for me, with the whole shift and everything. I took inspiration from a bunch of big artists who do this often. I thought it was cool to merge 2 different rhythms and moods into a song this way. It's a bit cheap but, whatever, I like it.
It's basically about a guy trying to stop his friend from killing herself. Then the guy subtly reveals he has feelings for her. Then in the end he just hopes she survives. lol.
LYRICS:
Loving doves on a tray
Even if you are fallen prey
Live in dreams, not what seems
Try with paper everything that gleams
Don't give up
Step back from the line
You find darkness in sunshine
Promise you, we do too
Through the view and all the things that grew
We do too
Oh way
Find your way
Oh pray
Fallen prey
'Cause someday you will see
There are things beyond the sea
Don't look down to covered light
Lift your head up to where all is bright
So hey
Find your way
And pray
Fallen prey
Looking pretty under the city
The skies are falling apart
Talking witty but not near dirty
'Cause maybe it's time to depart
Oh can't you see this broken heart?
You took a stab where no blade would jab
It's bleeding more than before
And where is your beau? We all miss him so
Didn't make it to the shore
Yeah, call it life but this is war
Oh, if there is any hope left here
For us
I want to be with you
Only you
Why do you play the role of a fallen pray?
Beaten
We see the darkness too
We too
Rain is dropping and it won't be stopping
Gotta get you home tonight
Maybe you'll miss me, maybe you'll kiss me
I only hope you'll be alright
You are not the only one around
Stepping nearer, it only looks clearer
I hope you're turning around
This isn't the end for you lady friend
So come from lost to found
Oh, I can see your broken heart
Oh, if there is any hope left here
For us
I want to be with you
Only you
Why can't you see me standing here?
Beaten
I still do hope someday
You find...
Your way
Find your way
And pray
Fallen prey
'Cause someday you will see
There are things beyond the sea
Don't look down to covered light
Lift your head up to where all is bright
So hey
Find your way
And pray
Fallen prey
Wow!!!
Dude, this is a really well written song man!!
I was curious.
I was wondering if you could lend the instrumentals with all due respect to cover this song voice wise. Mighty thanks, but I understand if you choose to say no. Great song!!
(I made a newgrounds account just for this XD)
I'm really glad you like it! :) I'll send you a PM with the instrumental file ;D
Thanks for the review! =D
definatly well worked on
jeez i find the lyrics seriously meaningful! awesomely orchestrated for both singing and music! the voice sounds ok and fine that needs a bit more experience and more feel but it definatly doesnt come close to ruining the song! great job a must grab to me. hope u get more recognized!
Ah! Finally someone finds the balls to criticize my voice! =D I'm really happy about that, really. I'm glad to know that it's not so bad XD but thanks for coming honest about it needing some practice and crap. I'm glad you like the song anyway! Yes, I tried to make the lyrics meaningful, but I'm a terrible writter :P
Thanks for the review! =D
Nice!
I found it quite interesting and thought it was a good listen.
Critically, I felt that the vocals were a little too dominant over the instrumentals, but thats not too bad since you have a good voice. I wish I could throw some example of what this reminds me of, because it is very familiar, and thats because its really great. Great emotional song.
On a side note, you REALLY sound like the singer of Red Animal War to me. I don't know why :D.
I'm very glad you enjoyed it, and that you thought it was good to listen to.
Yup, I know what you're saying about the vocals. It was done on purpose, but maybe I exaggerated. I just wanted to make sure they sounded clear. I kinda suck at tracking and all, so yeah, my bad.
Hmm, really? I guess I'll listen to them and see if its true =P
Thanks a lot for the review! =D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Wolftacular 
