Absolutely not bad.
Considering this was done with only a demo version of FL, I have to give you some extra cred. That version is very limited.
Some of the problems can obviously be blamed on the fact that you're using a demo-FL. When these points are taken out, there's really not much to say about this, as the main problems I have with the song, the reason I'm taking some points of the score, could easily be fixed in a full version of FL, and I know you could easily do that yourself.
The first part of the song might be a bit slow, and the change to the drastic second part of the song is quite sudden, but this might just be my taste. The outro was okay, but not too special. I guess that too could've been fixed in the full version.
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