In all seriousness..

I'll give you seven for effort.

This track could be really good if there was more time spent on Equalizing and Maximizing the track properly. It almost sounds as if there is a lot of low-end reverb is going on during the half-way point in the song.

I'm going to assume you're using FL.

On the master there is probably a limiter which is probably adding to the distortion that I'm hearing. I would advise to disable the limiter and Equalize each instrument individually then enable it again.

I'm going to assume that you're okay with Equalizing and such.

(Btw sorry for the bother haha I really don't care about NG or it's users; If you really wanted to become something in music production, you should consider producing REAL progressive trance [i.e. Mat Zo]; also no more using presets.)

WOAH

The guy below me did not just Say Scott Browns melody is boring. He is like one of the most renowned music artists in techno man. Anyway this is good but try adding a little spice into it if you know what i mean. other than that good job 9/10 5/5

Great

Sounds really good! this is my first review iv ever wrote so i dont really know what to say other than its good. Maybe the melody is abit boring :P