This piece is brief but it says a lot. I wrote this song in 2005 for my good friend. The short introduction is intended to describe the confusion and uncertainty he was going through for a time. The following section was written to describe the pressure and weight of life baring down on his shoulder, but there was a glimmer of hope. The triumphant section emphasizes his determination to forego the tribulation. Then, rounding it off, is his new found strength for life.
Enjoy the piece, and I hope its song rings true to others as it did for my friend.
Cheers and vote fairly,
-Corbet-
Interesting
Truly sounds like an orchestra is playing it. Your friend is very lucky to have such a work dedicated to him. However, even with a great speech, it has to end well. That's where you stumble. You don't fall flat and have the rugged pulled out beneath you, but it does end rather abruptly. Very nice regardless though.
Holy cow!
Dude, I am VERY impressed! How did you get such a realistic orchestral sound? This song is epic, and powerful. I totally dig it.
5/5
Would love to see this in painting form
hard to explain what I mean but I imagine seeing this as a painting in a museum and loving it. I picture a tragic yet beautiful scene....hmm
I can definitely dig on that.
classic
Amazing piece, you're a star and in my top 3 now, along with David Orr and Marky Spark. Genius!
Your words are too kind. Thank you so much for listening.
Typed to the music.
0:00
What to do what to do is everything gone am i still here what is this place ah ive got to finish that deadline no no i just need to wake up.. this isnt happening im so stressed..
0:32
Look at this place. Its trashed. I look out the window and I see a glimpse of the sunlight shine through my torn curtains and over my pale face. Sometimes I wonder if the outside world is truly a masterpiece created by God, or if its just some cheap joke to attract us tourists into what people call life...
0:57
I cant stand it anymore ive got to do something about this mess. Perhaps I could paint my emotions... perhaps I could.. no wait. Ive got it! I just need to tell her about my feelings through painting of course! Ive got to find paper where is the paper. Ahah!
1:23
Ok just a few gentle brush strokes here... and a few strokes there. A few dashes of red here, and a few dashes of white there. Some pink, yellow, gold. A jagged line, a smooth twist. Some splashes here, water there... paint paint paint.
2:13
Its done. Its finally done. My shoes are one. My car is on. My painting is in my hand.
2:48
Time to go.
Completely different parallel but very awesome! I'm glad those words came to you during the piece. Thanks friend!
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*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.
corbetweller 
