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This is very smooth but one thing I think you need to work on is building things up I fee like this song has no build up just a constant flow makes it less exciting in my opinion.
I also would suggest working on the bass I can barley hear it over everything else
I agree with the guy below me that the melody has a wired feeling which I am not saying is bad its different and I like different.
I think the drums could of had more variation instep of the constant 4 X 4 kick but its not to bad
Good work :):):):
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