Aye!
This is pretty good I must say! 5/5
Author Comments
5 Hours of solid work. I feel that its very well done for how much time I've spent.
-=Lyrics=-
You will always be my rose
I had a dream that we were under water
with all the life in the sea
And you were mad because you were with me
I said relax lets enjoy this time together
Let it go and be happy forever
But you were on a mission to end this thing tonight
I will never let you go
If I lose you I'll lose my glow
Beautiful from your head to your toes
You will always be my rose
sunlight in the morning reminds me you are away
my nightmares break up with me every day
Of course you're not the one to blame
I point the fingers and call you names
I took this silly game we play and put it all to shame
I will never let you go
If I lose you I'll lose my glow
Beautiful from your head to your toes
You will always be my rose
I know that you will miss me too
So don't you come and cry
This feeling you haven't got a clue
So don't come asking why
This feeling you haven't got a clue (I will always be your rose)
So don't come asking why (I will always be your rose)
I will always be your rose
New Wave Gold
This song is incredible! It's so fun and perky! Huge Fan!
Total Score: 15/15
Good!
Didn't quite agree with the melody or the sounds you used. They were a bit too metallic and "sharp" in sound. The background noises are a bit too loud, some not loud enough.
The lyrics are GREAT.
fishfood2021 responds:
Again thanks for the honesty and the review :). I'm always open to new ideas and suggestions. Maybe we can possibly go into more depth and fix the problems with the song. Thanks again!
Awesome
I love all your music but in this I wanna hear your voice over the music, its not to hard to hear your voice but it seems almost like the music and your voic are clashing. but still ,brilliant!
fishfood2021 responds:
Thanks a bunch homie. I'll see what I can do about it.
Nice voice!
You have a really nice voice wich suits this song very well. The lyrics are in time and sound great with a fantastic melody behind them. A bit too much repetition for my liking though. Great overall, worth listening to.
fishfood2021 responds:
Thanks for the review :D
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