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Dants my pances off. Overall is a pretty decent melody and it is enjoyeable, as for the structure, that hasn't been my sharpest knife lately but i see the other review got it cover, thought it did not make the 10 cut it was still good.
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well, i normally don't make this kinda stuff,
but it just sounds better this way,
so "dants" your "pance" off, sirs
kjhsdgf responds:
i understand, i just liked the instruments :P
thanks for the comment!
Overall good, but where are we going?
I like the overall feel and the instrumentation. But it's hard to explain any other way-- where is the song going? It doesn't feel like beginning > middle > end, or even A > B > A(repeat). Just feels like random chords behind random notes that may or may not even fit in the chords. Solid ground to build on, though. :)
kjhsdgf responds:
well, the melodies and harmony are all traids/sevenths in the key of g min, but i left the main melody out, because the instrument blew ass.
really, the octave tenor voice is probably what makes the chord pattern so confusing.
although the bassline does have a little too much movement, so i can see where you're coming from.
but i'm glad you liked the instruments, and i'll be sure to keep those :D
thanks for the review, matey!
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