Great.

I really love your melodies in this, and I hate to always be the only guy to comment whenever I hear a good piece.

In the beginning I was a little sketchy, but you have some great fluidity and meat in this song, something that presses you on. My only complaint is that in the verses, it's very hollow. With a little more bumpy bass (considering this is originally a rap or whatnot) and some more satisfying drums, this is a great.

On some other notes, the bass may be a little too obstructive as the piece is very haunting. Perhaps more emphasis on the triangle and less on the square

Finally, I have to say that it reminds me of a pokemon (red) town theme, with the transition being a walk into the gym. Not that I'm a huge pokemon fan, but that game has some stellar music and I felt it was worth noting.