Grey fire

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this is one of my first songs i made. constructive criticism appreciated.

EDIT: recorded over with some real instruments and improved some other stuff

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IxionAerospark

2011-01-01 20:30:46

Novice? think not

you should offer to collaborate in forums your music would go great in arcade style sprite games. Badass! keep up the good work kid!"

ktgen responds:

thanks but yeah i am a novice, the quality somehow turned great.

nunyabizness

2010-08-09 02:06:59

Good song..

Good song dude. Constructively try this to improve upon it..
1. Try normalizing the audio, possibly adding some compression and adjusting your mids..it sounds a bit muffled
2. Try adding some more variety to the song. The beat is catchy but repetitious.
3. Keep cranking songs out. You have talent.

ktgen responds:

thanks for the feedback. im a novice so i still have lots to learn

machinestomp

2010-08-06 13:03:39

Nice!

i like it i showed a couple of my freinds too

GeneralHooHa

2010-08-05 18:52:49

Catchy

This is really catchy man; I'm digging it. It's bringing up nostalgia for something...

ktgen responds:

thanks for the support, i really appreciate it.