very nice
but if you are gonna improve on it them might i suggest this:
maby when at the start he sais i am fling high and soo on make him say a little mroe then that. make it a bit longer. its the intro and its a bit too short so that would make people say of this sucks. accept for the fact its soo short they dont have a chance to and end up hearing the best of the song before they play another song. so yes that very short intro might be a tactic if your bad at song intro's
VERY NICE SONG :D