Hmm...

This does not belong in trance. The slayer is way out of place. You need to tweak your instruments, and make them more original. That just sounds like you took the sounds FL provides and made a song. Now I am not saying it isn't a good song (it was mediocre), but if you want to go anywhere, you have to make your own instruments. I understand this is the first submission, but if you want to get better you need constructive reviews. Good luck.

wow

i use fl studio, u shud see my stuff, it sucks compared to urs, how did u do that in fl studio, like make it long and 1 staite sound???