Dope
As the title says, dope.
heres a possible song off a mixtape im working on so we made the chorus sound off haha anyway friend made the beat/chorus and i provided the lyrics and rap so please enjoy
Verse 1
Winter days
Dark clouds
I walk among the crowds
Every one needs a hero
Battling forces of evil
I want an s on my chest
But the smoke of the street
Is all on my breath
And all I see around me is death
divided by invisible walls
this aint rocket science
or nuclear fission
so clear the vision
I wanna guide a decision
I wanna chose right over left
Be someones hero
And forget the rest
But when I walk the corner
I see a mother a mourner
Daughter just got raped
And here I am letting him escape
I thought I could be hero
But I realized I had no cape
I realized that i had no cape
Chorusx2
I aint no superman
the world ain't in my hand
Im no savior
Im no superman
I aint no superman
Im not here to save no man
Im no hero
Im no superman
see this kryptonite in my hand
I aint no superman
Verse 2
Walking along this street
Thinking of all those underneath
I mean I wish I could've done something
Instead my first instinct is running
Ill be there next time I promise myself
I wont run and be a coward to myself
Ill hold my head up high and stop crime
As long as I get in in my mind
Theres an s on my chest
And ill shut my eyes and ill fly
Tears of shame I cry
Cuz it don't matter what I do
Its all a lie
Im no hero but wait
I heard something in the alley
I walk by double take and I catch somebody
They robbing a man at gun point
So whats the point
I put my head down and walk away
But fuck it I turn and run in
Spirits high let loose of my sins
Im ready to die tonight
So I run past the street light
And look up to the stars
In the end I say Allah-hu akbar (God is the greatest)
(multiple gun shots fired)
Dope
As the title says, dope.
NICE!
Its a good beat and MUCH better than 98% of the modern hip hop and rap.
You rap about stuff we want to hear not about drugs, cars, and girls.
Keep It UP!!!!
Lyrics and flow are badass.
This is fire here. The verses are just killer on this. The chorus even won me over even normally i wouldnt like it because well... i just wouldnt lol. Lyrics are powerful and the flow fits and is natural. I enjoyed it keep em comming.
Good
I really like this song. Better than most of the modern hip hop songs. I also like the lyrics.
im glad you like it! thank you for the taking the time to listen. i really appreciate it
this is beautiful
5/5 10/10
thanks for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.