This song took me about 36 hours to fully complete, but I didn't get a chance to edit/mix it. This is a rough copy & a fully recorded/mixed version will be coming soon, but until then, enjoy.
Feedback is much appreciated.
Don't forget to vote!
Original piano melody : digital-musician, his page is http://digital-musician.n ewgrounds.com
Everything else: InvasiveInsomniac, my page is http://invasiveinsomniac.
newgrounds.com
P.S. I realize I can't sing for shit.
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I saw you're reply to Klazik..
Three 10's from some random newgrounders doesn't mean much..
I like your lyrics, they are ok but if you're not gonna have great quality..
You should work on making it so you aren't overpowered by the beat..
You are kind of overpowered and its hard for me to understand..
(or put a lyricsheet up?)
The only thing you need to work on is your flow, and your quality. Good track.
Keep it up.
thanks for hereview dude, andiknow you're right.. it's just that a 3 was unreasonable, while your score wasn't. thank you, i'll work on it
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You should use some afrin! omg i feel sick now.. I need to blow my nose..This is how is gonna be from here on out? lol these rhymes are so, so... Actually this track ruined my coffee..Hope ya feel better!! Why dont ya just drown your sorrows with some beer? Wheres the booze at? 5/5
Klazik
Hmm... Yes well, obviously this song is pathetic, hence why it recieved three 10's and an 8 in reviews and a very good score. Obviously you're taking a very immature offence to my review on your friends song. Please hurry up and get over it.
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wen i get older i will make songs i like your stuff man its real cool my dad told me to never tell someone what you r maken sorry i wont tell you but wen i get older i will make songs here is 1 lyric (i just want to brake you down) my dad is in a band it is low gear but that band is well thay broke up but hes in a new band
Thanks man, glad you like it. Just remember, if you wanna make music, practice makes perfect. Good luck to you bro..
I like how you went into detail about the struggle
The lyrics were the power point of this song. All it needs is a better mic but you have a deep track right here. Hope the girl took the time to listen to it and recognize her error. Females emotions go out of control and they do things then regret it later. Thats how it works sometimes. Great song Invasive!
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Thanks heaps for the great review, yeah the lyrics were something I tried really hard on. Yeah I do need to get a better mic, but the $500 one I'm using at the moment, blew my budget as it was. Glad you enjoyed it, keep an ear out for the mixed version when it comes out. :)
Sounds better already!
Cheers for using my melody, nice job!
No worries man. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
InvasiveInsomniac 
