Sweet
Honestly ducksuck must think we are in the metal section.
But im loving this song you both killed it.
And the beat is more than stellar.
I love it.
This is track #3 off of my new EP "Walked Into Yesterday". Originally this was never even a song that was going to be on it, but KlazikNadi one day wanted to collab and this came out and i personally liked it alot asked him if i can use it and wahlah! So big ups to KlazikNadi!
Song: Bring Me Down
Artist: Emdee & KlazikNadi
Album: Walked Into Yesterday EP
Produced by: NG Artist - CKC
Verse 1 : Klazik Nadi
They wont give me opportunity. What did I ever do
to deserve all this scrutiny. I say mutha fuckin mutinity
You give me the munitions, man im the new edition
Your stories are all fiction! Stop quit, no ones listening!
Your lies, tries, denies, selfish plies. Stop and just cry
Tell me why? They always giving me their two cents.
Its non-sense,its unsensical, why don't you pick up the pencil?
The keyboard or the pen, go ahead bomb me, friend!
Ill be overt, wont be discrete, its like a connivers feast
Im a beast! Wont quit ever, never, you fucking leach!
Beating you is no feat and ill hang you out like a wreath!
Out in view to be laughed and scorned by your peeps
Stop instigating me cuz ill just rip you and repiece
You face, mentality, teeth. Call me the secret police!
You're soft as fleece. Im not hard but Im like Reece!
Terminating you cuz of this major breach of peace!
chrous
Quit bringin me down, down down down/ x2
Verse 2 : Emdee
They try to tell me how to, fuckin live my life but I/
dont listen to a thing they say cause its nothing but lies/
sometimes I wonder why they try to bring me down/
yo put the mic down, quit foolin' around/
quit bein' a clown, just sit down now/
nobody wants to hear you out/
if i listened to that from the start, chances are/
i wouldnt be here tonight, spittin' out my heart/
but, no matter what they say/
ill never be able to stay away from the page/
in which i express all emotions, from the things that i say/
these haters they gave me the fuel, for the fire to burn/
so i got what i need, with the potential respect i will earn/
just quit with the remarks, cause they will never work/
i just wanna leave you here, with these four words/(and they go)
quit bringin' me down/x2
down down down....
Sweet
Honestly ducksuck must think we are in the metal section.
But im loving this song you both killed it.
And the beat is more than stellar.
I love it.
Thanks alot man, i like this track to (obviously lol)
shit
striaght whack
haha okay, ducksuck.
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Lets see, I liked the beat, but not so much the vocals. I don't think rapping is for you. Either that, or you need to find a better rap voice. Some parts of the song, you were trying to keep up with the song, and I think you should keep a pace your comfortable with. Besides that, the beat was very well put together. My advice, stick to producing skills, and let someone else do the vocals.
-Spooner
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Love the beat, and both of your verses were very solid :]
Keep it up nadi!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.