waz uuuup
dis cool
Author Comments
I think I'm getting better at producing music. I did this one in Ableton and played the parts through various synths using my midi controller. Then I wrote this 16 bar verse. I think I'm going to turn this one into a full song sometime later. For now enjoy, I'll take it off when I start to work on it more.
we sleep in abandoned streets together
been a week since my last meal
I stare and you pinch my cheeks
Cause I'm not convinced this is real
We saw the buildings fall
The smiles on the billboards all are gone
We don't speak and we don't need words
Cause anything but silence seems absurd.
And no violence, no more war
No more pompous selfish bores
With an ad campaign on what to die for
And a guilt trip always in store.
Obesisty's not a problem anymore
povertys not on the rise
The market isn't doing so well this morning
But that's what happens when everyone dies.
Agreed!
Speak the truth bro lol.
A quote that i very much enjoy preaching to people is...
"The day that the power of love overcomes the love of power, people will live peacefully."
Something like that, you made me think of that when i heard this. It sucks that some people are forced to live in certain ways in order to survive...
yea i dig
this is cool concept ya got goin on man :D
like real talk if ya have a open verse on this and would to do a collabo or whateva holla at me and maybe we can do somethin wit what ya have here i like it so far man hit me bak sometime at Terencethompson90@yahoo.com aight bruh.
pce
-Skrilla
Yeah
I like yo style guy
Most people on here speak with no substance in their words
but chyeah hella reminds me of um...
CYNE - Running Water
I haven't been on here for a bit
but
I'm planning to make a comeback
Peace
d[-_-]b
BigRed responds:
Cool, I really dig Cyne so that comparison is much appreciated! Thanks!
Hmm..
The music is decent, the vocals are really good, but when put together they just don't seem to fit in my opinion. I personally don't know if I would have enjoyed the song without the vocals, but together they really didn't match. They didn't match the feeling that you were trying to portray with the lyrics and were just very distracting to the vocals all around.
That being said, I don't know much about music. I know what I like to listen to, but not the techy stuff. I notice that some of the reviews down below say they fit, but from a person who only listens to music I can say that it really doesn't match up too well.
All in all I do suggest finishing this, but I wouldn't mind seeing a change in the instrumental part of the song to better match the vocals a bit.
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4.38 / 5.00
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- Sep 29, 2010
- 12:12 AM EDT
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- Hip Hop - Olskool
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- 57 sec
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