Herrrm... Mustn't... Let... Brain... Escape...!!

OK, well, as V-M stated, this unfortunately wasn't that great, but you don't seem to be them most experienced artist on NG; Keep trying, listen to other peoples' stuff so you can get ideas, and then expand upon them. Not more else I can say because until you mature a little more in your artistic abilities, you're not gonna get the greatest feedback. 2up :(.

Sincerely,
Actually... I gotta go run away now, my brain just gave me the finger and ran out the back door, away from my computer speakers.

UH!

This sounds bad! UH the ending was bad!
I'm sorry gotten55 but thi wasn't really that good! But it wasn't the worst either!

Viewtiful-Masta