Not bad...
It's very quite, which is an interesting take on "Lux Aternea", that said downplaying the musical notes seems to defeat the intention of the original song.
Which was meant to build up to an "explosive" finale, in order to convey the concept of a drug high, and insatiable addiction.
While the music you created works well enough, it doesn't add or offer anything new, it feels like a lesser version of the original to be frank.
If you had done a cover of the song using a different instrument, I would have given you extra points for trying something different...
Thanks,
- Celx
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