ah, I see

5/5
5/10 because it was just missing the other 50% of the song.

So did you just get the program? Because this isn't horrible, there just seems to be no advanced editing, like mastering or anything ((though the fade in of the synth volume was pretty cool :) ))

I would suggest editing the crap out of the drum samples, they sound to basic and general ye know what I mean? They need more life to them, more oomph on the bass kick, more like... reverb maybe be the best way to say on the hats and such.

I would also suggest a bass line, those are always nice. This is completely lacking in that area :)

Maybe an instrument actually playing a melody or something too, that is a good thing.

Try to play with the sounds you have, the best way to make something good, is to make it your own, take a sound and make it how you want it to sound, that way it isn't the exact same sounds as other beginning FL Studio users who don't know what their doing ((YET!!))

So, good luck! And nice work on the composing :) ADD STUFF :D!!