Needed more channels
I thought this took a long time to build up, and then when you changed up the melody for a major lift at 1:30 you didn't bring in anything new... I think there's just one synth that rears its head beyond the 2:00 mark, and its oscillation is out of sync with the rest of the track. I like the general and simplistic style of the track altogether, but I thought it could use a few more channels, given its length.
7/10
3.5/5 (i voted twice -- take that NG)