Hey there
Hey! well.. this song.. it sounds to me more of like a bassline for a song then a song itself.. I liked your whole variation on drums.. always keep that, it makes good songs great... but.. Man.. you should keep fixing this song. maybe put a nice lead into it.. some pads.. maybe some good sounding piano.. and then this song would be pretty good:D ps.. this song is like 100 times better then my second submission xD you'll be good before you know it.. good luck
~Jason