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FP - The Oddity

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Nothing too crazy going on here, another solo piano piece, short, hopefully interesting enough.

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Very good song you got going here

First of all, I gotta mention that some parts of the song feels very J.S Bach-inspired. Like 00:25 til 00:30 and then 00:40 and onward til the end. Yeah that pretty much covers the whole song but you get what I mean xD. No hard feelings though, as Bach was a musical genius. You should be proud.

I have to say that I feel like you worked on making the piano sound dynamic (I recall I reviewed one of your songs long ago, pointing about this exact thing). So that's indeed a great improvement. Gives the song a really good flow! Quick question: are you playing this by yourself or doing it via a sequencer program. Doesn't really matter though, but if you're actually playing this I am damn impressed ;).

All the staccato bass notes give the song a very light feeling (which probably is why I keep thinking of Bach when listening). But the melody notes are legato and sadly I think this fact troubles the harmony between the bass and the melody, if you understand what I mean. I was thinking, maybe you should try to have the melody notes in staccato (except when taking those long chords) to so to say give more harmony to the song. That's the only improvement I can think of right now, but it's of course up to you and what feeling you want to give this track. It's a really beautiful track nonetheless! Oh... I also wish it was a little longer :/

If the song was just a tad longer, I think it could've easily hit next week's top 5. But unfortunately the NG AP voting system is incredibly electronica-biased so in order for a classical song to hit the top weekly it has to be outstandingly good. I feel like this track has that potential, although it's little too short. One can hope, though!

Keep up the good work!

~TiGeR

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX responds:

Wow! Thanks man, best review I think I've ever gotten in terms of C&C.

My girlfriend (who is a very talented pianist) has given me a laundry list of things to improve this song, so I'll toss up an updated version as soon as it's complete.

I did use a sequencer for this tune, but I do intend to learn it as I believe it's within my ability to play it.

I'm not sure which of my stuff you've review, but please do more, your reviews are excellent.

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Uploaded
Oct 28, 2010
9:48 PM EDT
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
1 MB
1 min 8 sec

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