This was the very first orchestral piece I ever wrote. I would like to share this with the rest of you =p
Leave your comments and feedback please.
work in progress...
1. Add some of those deep chimes (the metal pipes that sound like grandfather clocks) - add's a bit of "epic" flavor in there
2. you need (more) strings to "float" the transitions across - try long, deep chords
3. Spice it up a bit, it gets boring after 20-ish seconds
4. (optional) ad some choir into it. Look to Star Wars Episode I, the darth maul lightsaber battle lol...
Good luck!
food for the imagination!
Seriously a nice peice, could really sink my teeth into it (without souning too weird) well done :)
Thank you for the review, and you can sink your teeth into it all you want =p
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Soundweaver 
