wow.....

inspirational..

Its pretty good

The vocals and autotune are excellent (besides the fact that it's autotune). I can tell you spent some time on this and because of that this has a great appeal to it. In my opinion a hip hop song is 1/3 the lyrics and 2/3 the beat. The beat is ok but it is uses a melody we have all heard before. Haha but you didn't make the beat did you. Its very good overall. Collab?

amazing.

this is great man. you've got some really nice flow.

Speechless

Wow, I don't know what to say. It's actually really good. The words are just great, your delivery and flow is so nice. These words touched me man, I can relate. Keep it up.
Thanks for using my beat. Keep it up bro!
10/10 5/5 fav'd.
(The auto tune was a little over powering, but over all it was awesome)