Another slow-building song to a dirty climax using traditional instruments.
Will be featured on a minialbum called We're Better Off Alone
Check out my other track Woe&Sorry if you liked this!
I want to like this.
The sound quality is very nice, and the melody is pretty good, up to a point.
The main trouble with the song is a lack of cadence. You make the listener wait too long to hear you resolve back to the tonic.
Instead of a calming affect - which the sound of the instrument was betraying - I found myself gritting my teeth.
I don't think the lack of Cadence is a problem but the song lacks another dimension which seems to slow the progression.. it either needs another guitar part and more instruments and/or a riff that pops up now and again.
I will get to work on it soon.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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