The only suggestions...

I would say adding more reverb to the snare you used would make it seem, in my opinion, a bit more ethereal. And perhaps the addition of another, strong snare if the reverb idea doesn't really cut it. OK, now that I got that out of the way...

This piece is beautiful. Not sure if I should call it industrial, and I really don't care. This is simply beautiful. I love when strings are implemented into music that would otherwise "not need them," and I love how you implemented them into this song. Very well composed. 9/10, 5/5, faved.

naawwwwccce

From the very start I was totally entranced! Kinda epic song, and with reverb goin on pretty tight niche. Would love to see this song in a epic game cutscene. GG sir!

\Overall/ 8/10 4/5

This porridge was just right

Beautiful flow i love the epic feeling.

Got lost in this...

I was listening to it and I didn't even notice but I was just staring off into space. I remember noticing it was about 2 minutes in... Next thing I know its about to hit 2 minutes in again. I got lost just listening to it. It's amazing! ^_^ Very nice flow, and nothing interrupts or takes the spot light from the other sounds in it. I love it.

My my my ...

Very Smooth! It's so beautiful and graceful. yet there is a bitter sweet feeling to it. I like it :) All the cymbals & hats are excellent. Wasn't quite as low(bass) and full but still very good! You should be proud! There are a lot of stinker songs in the audio portal so when i come across a track as well arranged as this one, its makes me smile. Keep up the great work!

Review: 9
Vote: 5
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Total: 14/15