This song is still a WIP I've been working on in cubase, I've also started trying my hand at a BIT of mastering and quad tracking, however, as a whole, this track is yet to be completed, so tell me what you think of it so far.
alot of potential
Like you said, it's a work in progress. A couple things I'd suggest:
- mixing the levels a bit more.
- add more bass in there. (you're guitar seems a bit too "treble favored" in my opinion)
- Add some more emphases on your double bass, make it really stand out.
- Make it longer and some more phrasing in there. (What I mean by phrasing is make it so it's not full of repetition)
Other than that great job, I hope that helps any!
Thanks, a lot of you're tips will for sure help, the only thing about my tone is that I decided not to put a TON of low end into it so the bass guitar would stand out a bit more in the mix
Metal FTW
Ur guitar work is great, and u have great drum beats and intro as well as outro. However definitely not finished as it is not LONG enough.
Thanks broski, like I said, I just started working on this a couple of days ago and wanted to make sure it wasn't a lost cause ;p...When I have time I'm going to start writing some more for this, still haven't thought of what to put after the breakdown
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
SwareBear 
