Good.

I like the melody a lot.
Great job on this one. I know you only spent 6 hours on it, but the drums need to be equalized and louder. I WANNA HEAR THIS BUMPIN!!!
9/10
5/5
-Px

Just starting my ass!

This does NOT count as just starting. It's way too good. :)

this is nice!

cool effects, and melody is pretty catchy!

'Tis good.

As other have said, you need to watch the volumes and mix to keep it from drowning stuff out. It probably needs a break down, where you REALLY simplify it to the bare essentials, then comes back more developed than before. Music is a journey, and sometimes you need a quick breather before you get back on your way.

Turning out good, Liking what I'm hearing. I understand Writers block, which is kinda like Musicians block, only with words... Ahem, Anyway, You'll get past it. Sometimes, you just need to hammer around for a while to find where the inspiration went. 5/5, in case you wanted to know. :)

~Sir_Furious

Very nice

I have listened to your songs and i must say, you got really good in a very short time. You also were pretty good in the beginning, you got talent!
I will follow your music from now on.

About the song:
At some points it can sound very complicated, which i like. But the whole song tends to be simple. It also has a nice steady beat. Good work!

I hope you get past that block. I know how it is, i have it all the time :)
Maybe you wanna check out my music, i know most of it isnt really good (except for my last one) but maybe you can get out of that block that way. I always try to get inspiration from other producers.

Anyway, good luck!

- Damiën Fisher (Dragonarios)