umm a guess good
well, u do know t-pain himself isnt going to listen to this... theres always white people doin this work. He just reads a script. idk good try see what happens. but probaly just a way to get publicity.
Alright. So.. T-pain Got a contest going with his mixtape. He leaked a track called "Motivated Ft. ????" and he wants US to throw down a Verse. The Best Verse gets a spot on his upcoming mixtape "Prevolver" and a Shot on his upcoming Album "Revolver." So... You know, Heres my entry.
Lyrics
Grimcredible (Verse 2)
Ayo.. Life is always gonna have its ups and downs..
a Couple rounds.. and u be ready to snuff a clown.
but u dont gotta suffer now.. Instead you can come around
and be what you are.. and let them haters bust a frown.
let em cuss and growl while you stand with a fuckin smile.
Let em hate.. let em suffocate in their own degenerate
mind state. where they can find hate and embrace it til their minds break.
im always motivated by the souls of famous poets
with The greatest notion to have chosen Grim as the man devoted
to kill raps. With Steel gats.. u feel that? thats the feelin of ill cat
walkin in da room with real stacks bulgin from his Silk jacket.
call me illmatic. I will Blast clips filled classic rap hits that'll leave
you wrapped in plastic.
The muthafuckin lyrical assassin be attackin the back of you bastards
smackin you rappers wit the rachet. while I'm laughin at ya wack shit.
We takin the hate shit and turn it into great hits..
if you know they hatin.. this shit'll get you motivatedd!!
If You like it.. show support on my Youtube page.
Http://Youtube.com/Grimcr edible
It also has information on the contest itself.. on the submission I did on Youtube.
Check it out!!
Http://Reverbnation.com/G rimcredible
umm a guess good
well, u do know t-pain himself isnt going to listen to this... theres always white people doin this work. He just reads a script. idk good try see what happens. but probaly just a way to get publicity.
ofcourse.. But thats good enuf. Promotion is always welcome.
Cool!
This is sweet! :)
thx bro xD
gl gl
Flow is good and all... i dunno who will be out for the contest, but id knock up your lyricism if ya can. not saying it is bad right now, but im sure you can step it up more from what ive heard from ya. anyways..thats my thoughts..its gonna take a banger to get this spot. gL!
Klazik
i feel you man.. i just dont really feel like really tryin that hard. its just sumthin that i was gonna throw down.. there are so many entries.. that people will go choose the one that sounds commercial ish.. feel me? so im not gonna kill my self and kill a buncha dudes in lyricism and lose cause the other dude had shit bout drugs n shit..
awesome
Your verse reminds me of easy E and twista. pro stuff - thumbs up
xD good looks bro. appreciate the review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.