Dissension

AMBizarre just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Dissension

Download this loop

Author Comments

This is a rough draft - a prototype, if you will - of a song I hope make much better.

It's my first submission, and I'd appreciate suggestive hints and helpful comments: What did you like? What didn't you like? What could I have done better?

I couldn't really settle on a genre: it has elements of a few genres in it, so I decided to just leave it as miscellaneous and see how it goes.

Thanks for giving it a listen!

Log in / sign up to vote & review!

bobith88

2010-12-29 15:05:00

Great Start

My start was not as good as this in my opinion. Needs some work, but it'll be good when it is done.

Bleaker responds:

Wow, thanks man. I've done a little work on it, but it need a lot more. Thanks for your opinion!

AngelofPeace

2010-12-21 13:29:58

Not bad for a start.

Grunge, Industrial and D&B all seem to fit. I think to make it better, you need another instrument in the same key on a higher pitch with a mixup of the same tune. It has teeth, but the teeth are mostly blunt. Give it some sharper, higher bite, if you know what I'm getting at.

Bleaker responds:

Thanks! I'll work on my interpretation of your suggestion and see what you think after that :)