Why upload...

...if you're going to ask people not to listen to it?

Anyway, before you move onto anything else, find some better drums. The one's you're using are awful. Go around the internet and find some good drum samples, or ask friends if they have any. With a few exceptions, I try to make sure that I don't use the same drums from song to song, and I think it helps.

1/5. Upload only when you're confident with your musical ability.