Mastering does need done...

But concepts work, eh?

The quaky feeling is nice. It's kinda setting a tone for a very Sci-Fi effect. Notice, how in all GOOD Sci-fi, where things are very diffrent, they are pointing out the steady things in humanity. Sometimes, it's greed, sometimes, it's love...

While the bass line is in flux, unstable, there is an evolving theme that remains steady in the melody through the whole thing. Moar plz. 8 because of mastering and... C'mon, I ain't giving a 10 on an unfinished work. :P

~Sir_Furious