Sorry I took so long

Hey I just recently checked my inbox, sorry I took so long.

I don't really remember what I commented about last time, so I'll just cover stuff in here exclusively.

At the start, the intro feels a bit a rushed. I think that was to match the middle of the song where the tempo feels more appropriate. I really enjoyed how it picked up around 1:20 but don't make the intro worse, just speed it up during that gong part instead of making the first part sound weird.

The quality is a bit lacking, but it has a certain charm to it.

Originally I didn't like the flute as the solo thing, but It kind of grew on me. Maybe use a different instrument for the intro instead of the flute. I really liked it once the song picked up though.

Overall I remember had alot more comments the last time, so I'm pretty sure you improved ALOT! :D

I just think you could make it a bit louder (The whole thing) most of my other thoughts are just opinions.

String quality sounds alot better this time, And you have a much much better ending this time.

I enjoyed the drums and the song had a good theme going for it.

Remember there is always room for improvement, but good job!