To Be Honest...
Thru the whole song i was just like... Nut, not happenin, you had the theme goin but the mix arounds didnt fit together properly, and the drum wasn't workin, the first bass was not good either, sorry but it wasnt, try something a bit more dominating. all up, the song was "ok but could be much better" work with it!! cos if you dont i will, cos it makes me wanna do a full epic mashup of it, the hat was fine, that and the melody was put together nice, use some crashes and some bongo drums