*EDIT*
*updated it a bit with some balancing and sound issues, added some sound effects*
I made this for someone escaping a dungeon or castle or whatever, and being stalked and chased at night, while they frantically try to get away. I love to make stuff for games :D
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Thanks to wanessie for the heartbeat idea
Nice job
I think you have done a good job and you imagery is pretty much what is conjured in my mind, I do like the idea about the heart beat element, espically in the parts where the beat drops and to me sounds as if "their" hinding, then bam! the chase is on again! I think this certainly suits a video game much like you seem to think also.
great work mate keep it up!
I will probably go back and add some effects and resubmit it.
hmm...not bad
i agree with Wanessie; it could use a little something else to draw in the listener but other than that, its a great piece that would really fit a suspenseful chase scene
I agree with your agreement!
Good work
I can most definitely see someone being chased to this. You could probably add in a few more elements to increase the feelings of anxiety and stress that the chased character has. A 'feel' of heartbeats or dissonance can make the listener feel more drawn into the situation. Overall I like the idea. Good work!
OOOOO i like the idea of a heartbeat.
Not so much the dissonance, but the heartbeat is a good idea.
thanks for the review/8
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