Debt - Original song

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Debt - Original song

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Author Comments

This is a song I wrote the other day. Lead guitar and bass by Inber (YT name), vocals, acoustic guitar and song by me. Please do give me some feedback. :)

****Lyics****

I'm in your debt
causing my fall
I'm in deep down
and I'm wondering why
wherever I go
whatever I do
I think of your name
and I shouldn't do

Charismatic
diplomatic
so many things
we're not even close

And all these years
we've tried to hide
at least I did
and I rarely cried

I'm older nowh
and very brave
I'd fight a dragon
in my head

I'm all I need
and so much more
but in my heart
I'm beyond weak

You've got me good
It must be some disease
Cause I can't seem to get well

It's eating me away
it's eating me away....

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mrmcduts

2011-02-05 18:19:29

nice voice

your voice is splendid!

ace-jennings

2011-02-05 01:21:23

Sigfried and a Royal Lobster

Wow this is damn good damn good. I feel like a slice of butter on a rabitts (i know rabitts is spelt wrong, thats how we spell it where im from. Thank you kindly) spicy haunches! That means this song is great

branpute

2011-02-04 20:16:37

Really nice.

I really like this song. The guitar is so nice with the deeper tones it creates as you play it I can't exactly make a good review because this is some of the first kind of music i've listened to like this, but I like it a lot.

J-Unlikeable

2011-02-04 18:24:22

Great

I like it, you have a nice voice. The engineering of the voice is missing something though. Not sure what it is. Maybe pull the vocals back a bit, the seem to overpower the guitar in certain parts. I heard some reverb on the vocals maybe a little more, or maybe double the vocal parts? Good song though.

Stagnation

2011-02-04 15:46:32

Great track

Think this is an amazing song personally, well composed and very good singing.. Full of emotion.. Fits together so well, keep writing music!
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