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Finish Line (DEMO)

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Written by: Ryan Holter (ryanson)


Like yesterday, these lyrics were written on the spot and recorded with my new toy.


Unlike yesterday, I wrote these as I went and recorded as I went. They went hand and hand. I needed it done because my free trial ends in 13 days.


Ha, whoops. Didn't read the fine print.


The melody (if it can even be called that) and the first two words were in my head all day. The riff was the shortest and easiest. Why not, I thought? They kinda work. I guess. Idk. Took inspiration from me venturing into this new word... of recording music. I guess. Idk.


Hope it doesn't suck too much. :) Make sure to leave a review!
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Lyrics:


Secondary
Ordinary
Shoot me, kill me, kiss me, thrill me,
It's elementary


I'm fighting with myself, you see, so right now's not the time
"How can you even dream of talent when you barely write a rhyme?"


But I see
Can it be?
It's there, waiting for me


"At the cemetary
It's necessary
Aim and fire, your desire's gone"
Please someone help me


It's like a whole new world out there, but I love it everyday
I'd hate to tell the voices in my head that I'd love to stay


Cuz I see
Can it be?
It's there, my destiny


Now all that I see
Is extraordinary
Love or spite, it's all alright
I'm legendary

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Wonderful

This has a wonderful upbeat feel to it although the guitar kind of scared me for a moment when the sound got louder than usual for some reason or another.

Your voice sounds alright but it sounds like it has a mix of Gir from Invader Zim in it which made me laugh a bit as well.

The guitar riff and playing is rather nicely executed as well and speedy as well as cool to hear.

Overall, you did an excellent job on this beat.

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Credits & Info

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781
Downloads
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Score
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Uploaded
Jan 26, 2011
10:03 PM EST
Genre
Indie
File Info
Song
2.6 MB
1 min 52 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.